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Originally Posted by Fasterthanyou
Good content but needs proofing. Read outloud everything and you'll see what I'm talking about.
Get rid of the word "seemed"... blah blah, I'm sure somebody tomorrow nite will help you out  |
agree ill help if no one else will
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they call me the nutcracker  but thats not really all that true 
yeah everyone knows my car is a pos but thats ok...im still better than you! 
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