I would have started the music right in the beginning, and brought the text on that first page in kinda slow. Then slow the pace down just a touch. Maybe add another 2 seconds to most of those pics?
Try to end it at the end of a verse or the chorus too....
And maybe some pics of first and second gens?
- Justin
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1999 Camry - Beigemobile DD
2002 Suburban - Wife's DD
2004 Grand Cherokee - Not running / Project / Selling?
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